一、话题词汇
1. 假期：度假 ______
2. 旅行 ______
3. 厌倦的：烦闷的 ______
4. 忘记：遗忘 ______
5. 数以千计的：成千上万的 ______
6. 在阳光下 ______
7. 转身：翻转 ______
8. 寻找 ______
二、佳句仿写
9. 【教材原句】Did you go anywhere interesting? (不定代词+形容词)
→仿写：孩子们总是期待去一个特别的地方。
10. 【教材原句】Everyone was ready to find somewhere to go. (ready to do sth)
→仿写：我总是愿意在假期探索新的地方。
11. 【教材原句】I was so bored that I decided to find something to read. (so… that…)
→仿写：夏令营活动如此有趣，以至于孩子们都不想离开了。
12. 【教材原句】But, during dinner, I didn’t feel like eating because I felt sick. (feel like doing sth)
→仿写：长假第一天，我想为家人做一顿大餐来庆祝假期。
第2阶 经典范文模版
Hi, everyone. I am Tom (介绍姓名). I am very excited to (表达情绪) share my vacation experiences with you. Now I will tell you all about my last holiday.
I went to Hainan during the summer vacation (介绍假期时间和度假地点). The weather (介绍天气) there was sunny and warm. The beaches (介绍当地环境) were beautiful with clear blue water.I tried many water sports like surfing and diving (介绍游玩项目). I also visited some local villages and learnt a lot about their traditional culture (介绍其他活动).
It was really an unforgettable vacation (总结感受)
第3阶 高分范文赏析
请根据下表提供的信息，以“My Winter Vacation”为题，用英语写一篇介绍自己寒假经历的短文。80词左右。
时间：去年寒假
地点：北京
活动：参观故宫博物院，爬长城，品尝北京烤鸭
感受：学到很多历史知识，玩得很开心
◎第一步 审
* 体 裁：记叙文
* 时 态：一般过去时
* 人 称：第一人称
* 内容要点：假期时间、地点、活动、感受
* 写作框架：总——分——总
My Winter Vacation
开头：引出寒假经历
中间：详细描述在北京的活动
结尾 ：总结感受
◎第二步 列
结构
*开头：交代假期时间和度假地点。
> Last winter vacation, I went to Beijing with my family.
*中间：依次描述参观故宫博物院、爬长城、品尝美食的经历。
> We visited the Palace Museum... Then we climbed the Great Wall... We also tasted the famous Beijing Roast Duck...
*结尾：表达自己的感受。
> I really had a great time...
**高分范文**
My Winter Vacation
Last winter vacation, I went to Beijing with my family. It was an amazing trip.
First, we visited the Palace Museum. The ancient buildings there were so beautiful that I was deeply attracted by their long history. Then we climbed the Great Wall. Standing on it, I could see the beautiful scenery around. It was really a wonderful experience. Besides, we also tasted the famous Beijing Roast Duck. It was so delicious!
I really had a great time during this winter vacation. I not only had fun but also learnt a lot about Chinese history.
【中文翻译】
我的寒假
去年寒假，我和家人去了北京。这是一次令人惊叹的旅行。
首先，我们参观了故宫博物院。那里的古建筑非常漂亮，其悠久的历史深深吸引了我。然后我们爬了长城。站在长城上，我可以看到周围美丽的风景。这真是一次美妙的经历。此外，我们还品尝了著名的北京烤鸭。它太美味了！
在这个寒假里我真的玩得很开心。我不仅玩得愉快，还学到了很多关于中国历史的知识。
范文二
My Exciting Trip
Last summer vacation, my family and I went on a trip to the mountains. It was a wonderful experience for all of us. We climbed along the mountain paths, enjoying the fresh air and beautiful scenery. At the top, we saw a breathtaking view of the valley below. We also picked wild flowers and took lots of photos.
This trip made me realize the importance of family time and the beauty of nature. I felt relaxed and happy during the trip. It also gave me courage to face challenges in life. I’ll never forget this family trip!
【中文翻译】
我的精彩之旅
去年暑假，我和家人去山区旅行。对我们所有人来说，这都是一次美妙的经历。我们沿着山路攀爬，享受着新鲜的空气和美丽的风景。在山顶，我们看到了下面山谷令人惊叹的景色。我们还采摘了野花，拍了很多照片。
这次旅行让我意识到家庭时光的重要性以及大自然的美丽。在旅行期间，我感到轻松愉快。它也给了我面对生活中挑战的勇气。我永远不会忘记这次家庭旅行！
范文三
My Trip to Beijing
I went to Beijing on vacation with my parents this summer.
On the first day, we went to Tian'anmen Square and I watched the flag-raising ceremony. How wonderful it was ! Then, we visited the Great Wall. Like its name，it is great. The next day we visited the Palace Museum, the Summer Palace and the Temple of Heaven. We took quite a few photos. We ate Beijing Duck. It was delicious.I also bought some souvenirs for my friends.
Although I felt very tired, I was happy. I hope to visit Beijing again.
【中文翻译】
我的北京之行
今年夏天我和父母去北京度假。
第一天，我们去了天安门广场，我观看了升旗仪式。多么壮观啊！然后，我们参观了长城。名副其实，它非常雄伟。第二天我们参观了故宫博物院、颐和园和天坛。我们拍了不少照片。我们吃了北京烤鸭。它很美味。我还为我的朋友们买了一些纪念品。
虽然我感觉非常疲惫，但我很开心。我希望能再次游览北京。
范文四
My Trip to Qingdao
I went to Oingdao with my friends last summer vacation. We had a wonderful time there.
We went to Qingdao by bus. We got there in the afternoon. The weather was nice. We couldn't wait to go to the beach near our hotel. Everything was beautiful. We walked along the beach and enjoyed the soft sand and the blue sea. In the evening,we had some seafood for dinner.It was delicious.
The next day, we went to Laoshan Mountain.It is not high,but it is famous and beautiful.There were many visitors. We took quite a few photos there.
We enjoyed this trip so much that we didn't want to go back home.
【中文翻译】
我的青岛之行
去年暑假我和朋友们去了青岛。我们在那里度过了一段美好的时光。
我们乘公交车去的青岛。下午到达那里。天气很好。我们迫不及待地前往酒店附近的海滩。一切都很美。我们沿着海滩散步，享受着柔软的沙滩和蓝色的大海。晚上，我们吃了一些海鲜当晚餐。非常美味。
第二天，我们去了崂山。它不高，但很有名且风景优美。有很多游客。我们在那里拍了不少照片。
我们非常享受这次旅行，以至于都不想回家了。
范文五
Hi, everyone. I am Tom. I am very excited to share my vacation experiences with you. Now I will tell you all about my last holiday.
I went to Hainan during the summer vacation . The weather there was sunny and warm. The beaches were beautiful with clear blue water. I tried many water sports like surfing and diving . I also visited some local villages and learnt a lot about their traditional culture.
It was really an unforgettable vacation.
【中文翻译】
大家好。我是汤姆。我非常兴奋能和你们分享我的假期经历。现在我将告诉你们我上一个假期的所有事情。
我在暑假去了海南。那里的天气晴朗又温暖。海滩很美，海水清澈湛蓝。我尝试了很多水上运动，比如冲浪和潜水。我还参观了一些当地的村庄，学到了很多关于他们传统文化的知识。
这真的是一个难忘的假期。
